→ Choose a particular
person that you admire. Write the reasons for admiring him/her.
1. INTRODUCTION:
Thesis: Elif Köse whom I admire from the age of ten up
to now is the person I like really much in the view of being a good teacher and
being an English teacher.
2. FIRST BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Opening Sentence: Being a good teacher is the first reason why I
admire her.
Detail 1: her attitudes
Detail 2: doing the lesson in an
enjoyable way
Detail 3: taking care of her
students
3. SECOND BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: The second reason is
absolutely her being an English teacher.
Detail 1: helping me to decide my
job
Detail 2: going foreign countries
Detail 3: her being well-educated
4. CONCLUSION:
Reconfirmed Thesis: Briefly, there are some reasons why I am the fan
of my English teacher, Elif Köse. One of these reasons is her being a good
teacher regarding her attitudes toward me and my friends, doing the lesson in
an enjoyable way and taking care of her students. The other reason is her being
an English teacher in relation to helping me to decide my job in the future,
going foreign countries and her being well-educated.
→ Why is art education necessary in the kindergarten?
1. INTRODUCTION:
Thesis: Although all of the fields of education are
significant, in kindergarten, art education is the most necessary one in
relation to preparing children for primary school, providing children the
chance of being creative and making them more optimistic people.
2. FIRST BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Opening Sentence: In the first point, art education is necessary
to prepare children before starting primary school.
Detail 1: for children, being
self-confident
Detail 2: to make children social
Detail 3: making the children’s
level better
3. SECOND BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: In kindergarten,
giving children the chance of being creative is the second point of why art
education is necessary.
Detail 1: revealing the talent which
children have
Detail 2: for developing their
handcraft
Detail 3: proving themselves clearly
4. THIRD BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: What is more, making
the children optimistic person is the third and the last point.
Detail 1: about solving problems
easily
Detail 2: teaching them how to be
happy in every situation
Detail 3: for children, seeing the
life in a different perspective
5. CONCLUSION:
Reconfirmed Thesis: All in all, art education has a very crucial
place in kindergarten from the point of making
children ready for primary school, helping children to be creative and making
them not only optimistic but also happy people.
→ Why do we need to learn a foreign language before puberty?
1. INTRODUCTION:
Thesis: Even though there are many people around the
world who learn a language after puberty, it may be good for you to learn it
before puberty in terms of making connections with foreigners, not having
difficulty in both working and school life and having some fun.
2. FIRST BODY PARAGRAPH:
Opening Sentence: Making connections with foreigners is the first
necessity of learning a language before puberty.
Detail 1: communicating with that
country’s people easily
Detail 2: being aware of foreigner’s
culture and life style
Detail 3: understanding the world
better
3. SECOND BODY
PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: Another necessity of
learning a foreign language before puberty is not having difficulty in both
working and school life.
Detail 1: having a bright life
Detail 2: adapting yourself to your
lessons in a better way
Detail 3: making people respect you
4. THIRD BODY PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: Besides making
connections with people who are from a foreign country and not having
difficulty in both working and school life, having some fun is the last
necessity of learning a different language before puberty.
Detail 1: improving yourself
Detail 2: challenging yourself
Detail 3: meeting different people
and having friendship with them
5. CONCLUSION:
Reconfirmed Thesis: To sum up, learning a foreign language before
puberty is such a significant issue regarding making connections, not having
difficulty in life and having some fun. It seems to me that even if it does not
matter how old you are when you decide to learn something, it can be more
beneficial for you to learn a foreign language before puberty and as early as
possible. Also, as it was said in one of the proverbs that you cannot teach an
old dog new tricks.
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