Outlines

→ Choose a particular person that you admire. Write the reasons for admiring him/her.

1. INTRODUCTION: 
Thesis: Elif Köse whom I admire from the age of ten up to now is the person I like really much in the view of being a good teacher and being an English teacher.          
2. FIRST BODY PARAGRAPH:
Opening Sentence: Being a good teacher is the first reason why I admire her.    
Detail 1: her attitudes           
Detail 2: doing the lesson in an enjoyable way       
Detail 3: taking care of her students            
3. SECOND BODY PARAGRAPH:     
Transition/Opening Sentence: The second reason is absolutely her being an English teacher.
Detail 1: helping me to decide my job         
Detail 2: going foreign countries      
Detail 3: her being well-educated    
4. CONCLUSION:     
Reconfirmed Thesis: Briefly, there are some reasons why I am the fan of my English teacher, Elif Köse. One of these reasons is her being a good teacher regarding her attitudes toward me and my friends, doing the lesson in an enjoyable way and taking care of her students. The other reason is her being an English teacher in relation to helping me to decide my job in the future, going foreign countries and her being well-educated.            



→ Why is art education necessary in the kindergarten?                   

1. INTRODUCTION: 
Thesis: Although all of the fields of education are significant, in kindergarten, art education is the most necessary one in relation to preparing children for primary school, providing children the chance of being creative and making them more optimistic people.
2. FIRST BODY PARAGRAPH: 
Opening Sentence: In the first point, art education is necessary to prepare children before starting primary school.           
Detail 1: for children, being self-confident 
Detail 2: to make children social      
Detail 3: making the children’s level better
3. SECOND BODY PARAGRAPH:     
Transition/Opening Sentence: In kindergarten, giving children the chance of being creative is the second point of why art education is necessary.        
Detail 1: revealing the talent which children have  
Detail 2: for developing their handcraft      
Detail 3: proving themselves clearly
4. THIRD BODY PARAGRAPH:
Transition/Opening Sentence: What is more, making the children optimistic person is the third and the last point.            
Detail 1: about solving problems easily       
Detail 2: teaching them how to be happy in every situation           
Detail 3: for children, seeing the life in a different perspective      

5. CONCLUSION:     
Reconfirmed Thesis: All in all, art education has a very crucial place in kindergarten from the point of making children ready for primary school, helping children to be creative and making them not only optimistic but also happy people.


→ Why do we need to learn a foreign language before puberty?    

1. INTRODUCTION:
Thesis: Even though there are many people around the world who learn a language after puberty, it may be good for you to learn it before puberty in terms of making connections with foreigners, not having difficulty in both working and school life and having some fun.           
2. FIRST BODY PARAGRAPH:  
Opening Sentence: Making connections with foreigners is the first necessity of learning a language before puberty.            
Detail 1: communicating with that country’s people easily
Detail 2: being aware of foreigner’s culture and life style  
Detail 3: understanding the world better     
3. SECOND BODY PARAGRAPH:     
Transition/Opening Sentence: Another necessity of learning a foreign language before puberty is not having difficulty in both working and school life.  
Detail 1: having a bright life 
Detail 2: adapting yourself to your lessons in a better way
Detail 3: making people respect you            

4. THIRD BODY PARAGRAPH:         
Transition/Opening Sentence: Besides making connections with people who are from a foreign country and not having difficulty in both working and school life, having some fun is the last necessity of learning a different language before puberty.     
Detail 1: improving yourself 
Detail 2: challenging yourself          
Detail 3: meeting different people and having friendship with them         
5. CONCLUSION:     
Reconfirmed Thesis: To sum up, learning a foreign language before puberty is such a significant issue regarding making connections, not having difficulty in life and having some fun. It seems to me that even if it does not matter how old you are when you decide to learn something, it can be more beneficial for you to learn a foreign language before puberty and as early as possible. Also, as it was said in one of the proverbs that you cannot teach an old dog new tricks.